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Post by Likep on Oct 1, 2011 0:23:51 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2011 8:57:02 GMT
ZOMG CODS ACTIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Anyway, it's pretty good. I just think it needs to be a bit longer, and maybe some shading. Other than that it's fine.
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Post by Likep on Oct 1, 2011 15:21:34 GMT
Thanks. I'll remember to shade and fill in empty space if I make another course.
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Post by priok on Oct 1, 2011 15:43:09 GMT
Nice upload, I have to agree with what Cod said, though, it looks empty.
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Post by mdog95 on Oct 5, 2011 2:11:25 GMT
In technical terms, it's a good upload, but in artistic terms, it's, well, no offence, but it's pretty bad. If you could just improve on the artistic aspect of it, it could be great. Other than that, it's a pretty good upload.
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Post by Fringe Pioneer on Oct 5, 2011 2:42:05 GMT
I wouldn't say that it's aesthetically bad: that implies it's noobish use of PEN-S 2 in PEN free mode scribbled all across. I would say that there is such good potential. The main problem is that there is too much negative space - i.e. it's bare when you come to the end of the course...
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Post by mdog95 on Oct 5, 2011 2:57:57 GMT
Well, from the artistic standpoint, it has nothing impressive in it. That's really the only thing wrong with it, but, then again, that's the biggest part next to functionality...
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