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Post by Skribbblie on Jun 29, 2010 3:55:02 GMT
The enemy is at our gates. This conflict ends tonight. The armies that we trained so hard have lost the will to fight. The outcome is decidedly certain; we fight with empty hands. Whilst the tyrant's armies blast us from their rolling tin cans. The enemy is at our gates. This night will be are last. "Come out now," the commander says "We'll be sure to make it fast…" We know that death is guaranteed. We know that it is near. The enemy can feel it; our quickly growing fear. Will we continue to fight to no avail, or greet death with open arms? Our hope is now as dark as the ash of our burning farms. Now the tyrant's blind troops have crippled the wounded gates. The end is here. They've sealed our fates...
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Post by elton on Jun 29, 2010 4:02:06 GMT
I seriously dropped my mouth on this one. Amazing. Karma for you!
Also check out my forum story. i will update once I get a few views.
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Post by V.I.R.O.S. on Jun 29, 2010 4:04:10 GMT
Charmante!
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Post by Rabidbadger on Jun 29, 2010 15:22:23 GMT
Wow... That's even better than most all of my stuff...
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Post by Skribbblie on Jun 30, 2010 23:06:30 GMT
Thank you all! On a little side note, I came up with that AND wrote it in ten minutes. At midnight. The other one I made I came up with in the shower one morning...
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Post by Phantom Zero on Jul 2, 2010 0:36:08 GMT
Very good! I can do poems or any thing like that. That was very good!
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Post by Rabidbadger on Jul 2, 2010 11:55:06 GMT
You write things in about 10 minutes too? And stuff that good? You are definately better than me.
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