Post by Avenger on Aug 26, 2010 17:02:26 GMT
This is a story that I've made countless times before, rewriting and stuff. Those of you that remember it, this is different. I's narrated not written in a first-person perspective. It is a series of short chapters, because it would take me ages to type a full one, that takes place in a city called Dutton in the year 2013. Now, before I spoil the surprises, here it is.
If you find a grammar or spelling problem, point it out.
Chapter One:
It was Friday, a day everyone loved at the offices at the BioCorp facility in Dutton. Everyone was allowed to leave when they wanted, as long as five hours of work were put in. But that was the office complex, for the Labs underground, things were different. No one was allowed to leave early, they had too much work to do and a small time to do it. the researchers in the 'war Weapons' department were busily getting ready to test their new virus. This virus was able to deform the tissue of alive, or dead cells to mutate it to become aggressive, but very primitive. It was called V68.
The test subject, a rabbit - PETA was all over BioCorp for the mistreatment of animals for the past ten years now and still are - was put in white room. The rabbit was then injected with a blackish-purple liquid from a robotic arm that emerged from the wall. The robotic slid back into the wall after the injection. the scientists behind the one-way glass window were eager to see what would happen. The rabbit went into cardiac-arrest, then died. The experiment failed, like all the other ones. One of the scientists called for a cleaning crew to dispose of the body. Then went back to his research.
If you find a grammar or spelling problem, point it out.
Infected Chronicles: The Laboratory
Chapter One:
It was Friday, a day everyone loved at the offices at the BioCorp facility in Dutton. Everyone was allowed to leave when they wanted, as long as five hours of work were put in. But that was the office complex, for the Labs underground, things were different. No one was allowed to leave early, they had too much work to do and a small time to do it. the researchers in the 'war Weapons' department were busily getting ready to test their new virus. This virus was able to deform the tissue of alive, or dead cells to mutate it to become aggressive, but very primitive. It was called V68.
The test subject, a rabbit - PETA was all over BioCorp for the mistreatment of animals for the past ten years now and still are - was put in white room. The rabbit was then injected with a blackish-purple liquid from a robotic arm that emerged from the wall. The robotic slid back into the wall after the injection. the scientists behind the one-way glass window were eager to see what would happen. The rabbit went into cardiac-arrest, then died. The experiment failed, like all the other ones. One of the scientists called for a cleaning crew to dispose of the body. Then went back to his research.