my STORY, that i wrote in 8am without sleeping

[nmagain]

hello i made this story when i was in the gulf WAR


i was battling my way through terrorists when i found my target, a black man with blonde hair, i shot him, but then, i passed out.


PART TWO

i wake up in an abandoned condom factory while some people are molesting me, and, in a way, attempting to rape me. I tried to stop them, but they were too strong


PART THREE

i was pregnant in my fourth month, everything was disturbing, until i found my desire, it was a shirtless man riding a unicorn while wearing a freaky helmet on, known as general veers


PART 4

omg gv is sooo hot i want to stroke him


PART V

after stroking GV ferociously, i try to return to home, but i pass out again.


part 6!!!!

it is all black, and black people, i can't see a thing, but at least i can hear them talking

part 7

they are saying that i need to get "dealed with "

part 8

i fall asleep and wake up home, everything is blurry and disorted

part 9

it all came clear now, veers was using his attractiveness to trap me into getting raped by condom makers


part 10


i am having my

BABY



soon

part 11

my child is called dick, i called her that for obvious reasons


part 12

my daughter got raped by typing gangstas



part THIRTEEN

after finding out that veers has penal cancer, i returned to my home just to find out that my child is getting raped again


part fourfuckingteen

gangsters have became an everyday thing in me and my daughters life after veers died, his son is sad now



part 111555

i got fired from my job as a sith hooker last night for having physical relations with a jedi knight.


part 16

i am making my money off people on the internet by selling them pictures of myself wearing alot of carbon dioxide

part 17

my daughter died, i am 48, i get raped by keyboards everyday, i dont know anything any more



part 18

the gangsta typers got arrested, but now i'm in that condom factory again, they are making me stroke them now



part 19

i'm sent back home, bleeding from many places, injured and wounded in others, i don't think i will surviv anymor/.----................................


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part end

i died because of overstroking

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i hope you like my story, i made it i more than 30 minutes

it is an entry to elton eye's CONTEST

[Necrotising Fasciitis]

wow that was very powerful and very moving. 10/10

[nmagain]

Wow, I wake up at 3PM, and I barely remember typing this, I must've been some sort of high.

[ganondorfchampin]

This story is full of figurative language and has a very deep meaning regarding the meaning of life. Its very thought provoking. 10/10.

[Anonymousperson5]

...
I.
Am.
Confused.

I would have to say I agree with Cod on this.

[-The Universe-]

Yeah, I agree with Cod, but the plot is good, I guess.

[Qwerty]

Finally, a story that presents Veers as he truly is.

[Fringe Pioneer]

Please get sleep ASAP, and sleep for at least 12 hours...

[mdog95]

This is by far the best story I have ever read. It pierced my heart like no other and actually made me cry. 10.01/10

[Rock]

Veers must be regularly visiting the psychologist at this point.

[nmagain]

Hmm...

Is that...Morse code?

[Rabidbadger]

I want to stroke Veers now...

[nmagain]

I'm pulling another all-nighter tonight, gonna write another story, wish me luck.

[sparkpowder]

I can't even give this a 1/10.

My vote is 0.000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001/10

AKA: 0/10

[nmagain]

u jelly bro?

[Mad Cow 483]

It is very original, but it is unclear... were you a sith hooker the entire time? Who was the jedi knight? Neither of these played a part in the gulf war. An excellent plot though.

9/10

[nmagain]

Jul 12, 2011 17:30:08 GMT Mad Cow 483 said:

It is very original, but it is unclear... were you a sith hooker the entire time? Who was the jedi knight? Neither of these played a part in the gulf war. An excellent plot though.

9/10

the one on the right

also somebody posted about starwars VEERS INCOMING, PREPARE YOUR STROKING HANDS