Reply

Haiku!

Clockwork Posts Too Much {S=0}[M:-311] Chat moderator extraordinaire Posts: 499	Haiku! Apr 17, 2012 20:32:43 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Clockwork on Apr 17, 2012 20:32:43 GMT Haiku! "I see you drivin' round town with the girl I love ,and I'm like, Haiku!"
	Last Edit: Apr 17, 2012 20:33:52 GMT by Clockwork

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Apr 18, 2012 4:52:37 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Apr 18, 2012 4:52:37 GMT What do you know, you managed to get a giggle out of me.
	...

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 21, 2012 9:30:26 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 21, 2012 9:30:26 GMT that was totally random but it works made me laugh a bit too
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

AlchmistFaust Greater Being Очи чёрные, очи жгучие[M:-310] <!Dan-Ball!>A man of absolute wisdom over what man knows. Posts: 269	Haiku! Jun 23, 2012 23:22:27 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AlchmistFaust on Jun 23, 2012 23:22:27 GMT Some haikus Make no sense at all Refrigerator
	"What a man knows not, he to use requires, And what he knows, he cannot use for good. " Goethe

Clockwork Posts Too Much {S=0}[M:-311] Chat moderator extraordinaire Posts: 499	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 0:35:28 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Clockwork on Jun 24, 2012 0:35:28 GMT You got the syllable count wrong.

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 0:39:15 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 24, 2012 0:39:15 GMT yeah. This is a better haiku in terms of syllable counts! Come here Eltoneyes Come on, just do as I say F*** why wont you listen?*
	Last Edit: Jun 24, 2012 0:39:44 GMT by Hachi1 i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 0:43:09 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Jun 24, 2012 0:43:09 GMT That last line has six syallables, though.
	...

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 0:54:23 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 24, 2012 0:54:23 GMT hmm. Imagine it is said hurriedly and angrily, and it can be forced into 5 syllables. sort of.
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

Necrotising Fasciitis Chat Moderator [M:770] <!Dan-Ball!>Gasping for breath as you faint into death Posts: 1,084	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 17:28:31 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Necrotising Fasciitis on Jun 24, 2012 17:28:31 GMT that's not how haikus work.
	I'm just your friendly neighbourhood necroph-- I MEAN, normal male. WAIT NO, FEMALE. DEFINATELY FEMALE. Notice: The name "chainsawGUTSfuk" is not permissible. ~Fox It's damn acceptable in my world, fox. ~TBP It would be hypocritical of Fox and myself to tell you off for that. -MF

AlchmistFaust Greater Being Очи чёрные, очи жгучие[M:-310] <!Dan-Ball!>A man of absolute wisdom over what man knows. Posts: 269	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 18:48:22 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AlchmistFaust on Jun 24, 2012 18:48:22 GMT It's 5/7/5, isnt it? Damn, blame me and my poor grasp of the english language. Let me try something else... I'll title this "Frustration". With fiery sword or whip Hours spent on the monitor screen And the item doesn't drop
	"What a man knows not, he to use requires, And what he knows, he cannot use for good. " Goethe

Clockwork Posts Too Much {S=0}[M:-311] Chat moderator extraordinaire Posts: 499	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 19:46:58 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Clockwork on Jun 24, 2012 19:46:58 GMT I think you screwed up the syllable account too...

AlchmistFaust Greater Being Очи чёрные, очи жгучие[M:-310] <!Dan-Ball!>A man of absolute wisdom over what man knows. Posts: 269	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 20:09:34 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AlchmistFaust on Jun 24, 2012 20:09:34 GMT Again? I used a damn syllable counter!
	"What a man knows not, he to use requires, And what he knows, he cannot use for good. " Goethe

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 24, 2012 23:07:38 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 24, 2012 23:07:38 GMT it depends on how you say 'monitor'. to me your haiku was 5.7.5
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Jun 25, 2012 0:04:06 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Jun 25, 2012 0:04:06 GMT To be it was 6/9/7.
	...

AlchmistFaust Greater Being Очи чёрные, очи жгучие[M:-310] <!Dan-Ball!>A man of absolute wisdom over what man knows. Posts: 269	Haiku! Jun 25, 2012 0:09:04 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AlchmistFaust on Jun 25, 2012 0:09:04 GMT Well, I checked with a syllable counter, and It says it's 5/7/5.
	"What a man knows not, he to use requires, And what he knows, he cannot use for good. " Goethe

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Jun 25, 2012 0:45:21 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Jun 25, 2012 0:45:21 GMT The syllable counter is wrong, then. That's definitely not 5/7/5.
	...

Zrined Outstanding Member [M:314] Doctor Who Fanboy Posts: 682	Haiku! Jun 25, 2012 1:17:06 GMT via the ProBoards App Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zrined on Jun 25, 2012 1:17:06 GMT It was 7/9/7.

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 28, 2012 6:29:08 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 28, 2012 6:29:08 GMT now that I think about it, it is 7.9.7... Haiku's are so hard hahaha
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

Clockwork Posts Too Much {S=0}[M:-311] Chat moderator extraordinaire Posts: 499	Haiku! Jun 28, 2012 14:02:45 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Clockwork on Jun 28, 2012 14:02:45 GMT I say monitor with three, but I can see how it would be two.

Zrined Outstanding Member [M:314] Doctor Who Fanboy Posts: 682	Haiku! Jun 29, 2012 5:58:48 GMT via the ProBoards App Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zrined on Jun 29, 2012 5:58:48 GMT Haikus are not hard It only needs simple thought See this is easy

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Jun 29, 2012 6:03:16 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Jun 29, 2012 6:03:16 GMT Yep, that's proper proportioning.
	...

Artifact123 Forum King {S=0}EE Element Keeper[M:-839] <!Dan-Ball!>Everyone's equal, but some more than others. Posts: 1,641	Haiku! Jun 29, 2012 6:09:16 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Artifact123 on Jun 29, 2012 6:09:16 GMT I fail at haikus I get everything wrong lol what do i put here
	'You're only gods? How petty: I'm Man.' -Veers

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Jun 29, 2012 6:18:10 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Jun 29, 2012 6:18:10 GMT 5/6/6? Not quite...
	...

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 2:54:34 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 30, 2012 2:54:34 GMT the 'lol' at the end made it 6, just like the 'f**k' at the end of mine good try it was pretty close Jackson was my friend then he stole my handkerchief he's no friend of mine!
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

Zrined Outstanding Member [M:314] Doctor Who Fanboy Posts: 682	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 4:03:59 GMT via the ProBoards App Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zrined on Jun 30, 2012 4:03:59 GMT Finally

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 5:02:19 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 30, 2012 5:02:19 GMT Faust and I kept on failing xD not anymore!
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

priok Moderator [M:1448] A A A A A A Posts: 506	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 5:06:57 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by priok on Jun 30, 2012 5:06:57 GMT I am just a man I can see a big mountain I cannot climb it I do not know if I can write these messages I am very dumb

AlchmistFaust Greater Being Очи чёрные, очи жгучие[M:-310] <!Dan-Ball!>A man of absolute wisdom over what man knows. Posts: 269	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 5:35:08 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AlchmistFaust on Jun 30, 2012 5:35:08 GMT Last line on the second one has 6. This is a poetic Poem of this one poet Lol I didn't fail now
	"What a man knows not, he to use requires, And what he knows, he cannot use for good. " Goethe

QwertyuiopThePie Administrator [M:977802] <!Classic!>April 4, 2008 is the date I joined. Posts: 12,953	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 5:53:04 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QwertyuiopThePie on Jun 30, 2012 5:53:04 GMT I counted five. I-am-ve-ry-dumb. Actually, there's only five vowels. Also, "poetic" is three syllables, so not quite. If you used "Poet" it would work. I don't write Haiku. It can be pretty tricky. Well, it is not now.
	Last Edit: Jun 30, 2012 5:53:42 GMT by QwertyuiopThePie ...

Hachi1 Full Member [M:-70] <!Cobalt!>I'm sorry for being so nosey Posts: 121	Haiku! Jun 30, 2012 7:41:45 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hachi1 on Jun 30, 2012 7:41:45 GMT Colemak is a crepe With great skill he runs the site Qwertyuiop
	i61.photobucket.com/albums/h79/Swearingworth/badges/BadgeActivecopy.p

Reply

Quick Reply

DBF and DBF resources ? 2012