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Post by mdog95 on Mar 28, 2011 21:27:07 GMT
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Post by priok on Mar 28, 2011 23:44:29 GMT
I think it's alright, but it's way too under detailed. The ferris wheel is kind of bland, it needs more actual details put in for your lighting, especially on the inside. The ground for the wheel is cool, but the dither on the dirt needs to be a little better, it's way too angled right now, and looks strange. The roller coaster is alright, but again, you need more details, or make it less boring somehow. It's an alright upload, but you really could do a lot more
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Post by Qwerty on Mar 29, 2011 0:26:37 GMT
Wait a second...
Priok, did you just...
Wow. Priok posted a WHOLE POST in normal language.
On that note, yeah, it's better than most uploads that come out these days, but it could be much better, also with some functionality. Say, for instance, a "moving" Ferris wheel with thunder and glass, or some lighting effects on it, or just a little more compact pixel art. At the moment it has a ferris wheel and a roller coaster, which is interesting, but not really a theme park. Perhaps a series of uploads instead, each upload containing one more detailed ride?
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Post by mdog95 on Mar 29, 2011 5:44:49 GMT
It was actually an entry for a contest where i had to name it ThemePark, and I decided to just draw a ferris wheel and a roller coaster for it. It was originally going to be a whole theme park from the perspective of the gate, but I didn't have enough dots, so I just did that. I am going to start a series with much more detailed pixel arts, but it will have nothing to do with the theme park. The person in charge of the contest said it may win, so I'm happy with it. Thank you for the feedback though.
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