Post by ganondorfchampin on May 29, 2010 21:22:23 GMT
My other stories will take awhile to restore but I will start with this one, as it needs updating.
Chapter one: A temple to Hassi
In the beginning there was a desert. Frogga, the high priest of Hassi, cast her staff into the ground and built a temple to Hassi around it. She then found two followers, Linkz and Listorn,who was a demigod, and made them priests. People began to come to the Temple and soon it grew into a city known as Danebael. The priests became councilors and many new buildings began to spring up. Shops, libraries, and even a massive trash heap known as the spama. A currency was created for Danebael known as Danebaelums. New councilors were appointed, who's names were mainly lost during the disaster that was to come. People began leaving Danebael in mass and soon there was few people left. In a desperate attempt Frogga offered 25 Danebaelums for every person someone brings to Danebael. But none cared that much but a nameless soul who posted an ad in the lawless city of Pigcommenta. Soon all that remained was Frogga, Listorn, and a councilor known as Swerin Woth. Frogga gave her staff to Listorn and appointed him high councilor, and then she disappeared in the desert winds. Danebael was dead.
Chapter 2: Rising shadow
In the city of Pigcommenta a man known as Shadow Lornn saw the ad for Danebael. He thought it looked interesting. So he trekked across the desert sands until he reached Danebael. He did not realize the city was dead and he set out to buy some stuff to improve his appearance. So he entered a shop and found some really neat looking flaming stars that could be pinned to your cloak, robe, or armor. He wanted to buy them but they cost 500 danebaelums and he had no danebaelums, so he left the shop. Then he saw Frogga's ad for recruiting people. He then decided to go out and get 20 members to come so he could buy those stars. He went back to Pigcommenta and posted ads and even made a monument called an uploadios to tell people to come to Danebael. Soon 20 people came and he sent a message to Frogga requesting 500 danebaelums. After many days he still got no reply so he sent a message to Listorn. Soon Listorn came to him in person, gave him 500 danebaelums, and told him the sad fate of Danebael. Shadow bought the stars and then went back to Listorn, saying Danebael still had hope, for he managed to bring 20 souls and could bring more. Then he set off the save Danebael.
Chapter 3: Golden Age
Soon Danebael was repopulated. A new council was formed with Listorn at it's head. Second to Listorn was Swerin Woth and a being named Ji. Shadow was also of very high rank. Some other interesting councilors were Querty Solius, who secretly led a group of assassins called Noongas under the name Temp Nin, Zandzar, who led a bizarre cult that worshiped Listorn as the creator of life, and Shigat, who changed his name every few days. A new temple was built were people prayed for miracles. That place was informally run by a person named Secretus. One day Shadow disappeared. Things went on without him. A few years after Shadows disappearance Secretus and a highly respected citizen named Vurz were made councilors. All was good until the day a resident of Danebael had this plan.
Chapter 4: The wizards guild
Vaconcovat was a skilled spell weaver. He was so skilled that he created an entire world. One day he had the idea to build a massive arena in the heart of Danebael. He consulted with Listorn and soon they decided to create a building outside of Danebael were the task of making the arena was to be prepared. The building was divided into three guilds: the ideas guild, the artisan guild, and the wizards guild. Vacon ruled all three guilds. People soon flocked to the ideas guild, but to join the artisans guild one needed proof of art, and to join the wizards guild one needed to show proof of spell craft. A councilor, Molopouis, joined the wizards guild. However, it was soon discovered that Molopouis plagiarized the spell and in a blind rage Vacon cast out Molopouis and he was banished from Danebael. Later the building that held the guilds was destroyed in a monster sand storm.
Chapter 5: Chaos and destruction
Listorn announced one day that on Avril 1st, jokers day, Danebael would be destroyed. On Avril 1st everyone in Danebael woke up and found themselves in an alternate dimension. It was an odd place similar to Danebael, only it lacked all the buildings and Danebaelums turned to dust. Soon people were rioting. Gaeoedoae, a resident of Danebael, left this odd place and searched for Danebael. After traveling for days he found Danebael, but the moment he entered he was warped back to the odd place. When he and others also discovered the truth and that it was all just a huge prank they demanded that Listorn destroy the spell. But Listorn was gone. Gaeoedoae and a group of councilors found a way to prevent the spell from warping them back and returned to Danebael so they could destroy the spell. When they got there they found the place in ruins. Osine destroyed the spell and appointed Gaeoedoae, a resident named Grenpato, and some other residents as temporary councilors so they could help fix the place up. While Gaeoedoae was councilor he made this day a holiday,and did some other stuff to help. It was soon discovered that Secretus went insane under the pressure of the spell and warning, and was what caused the destruction of Danebael. He was demoted temporarily. Shortly after all the temporary councilors were demoted a tragedy happened. All the councilors, save Listorn and a lesser councilor named Emfor, were found dead.
Chapter 6: The judgment
After Listorn returned he revived the councilors with his divine powers. He then started an investigation of the crime.It was found that the Solius massacred the councilors and then killed himself. hat made no sense, since Solius was most loyal to Listorn and would never do such an evil act.Under further investigation it was discovered that Solius was possessed by Grenpato. But Grenpato was nowhere to be seen and he had nowhere to go, so it was concluded that Grenpato was another person in disguise. It was obvious that only one being would have the motive to disguise themselves: Molopouis, who immediately confessed and even gloated about his evil. Molopouis was brought before Listorn in chains.
“Molopouis, you have been charged with the murder of Vurz, Solius, Secretus, Arode, Osine, Bogi, Zandzar, and many more. For your punishment you are forever banished from Danebael and have a death warrant placed upon your head. Your name shall forever be a forbidden curse. Leave now or we will slowly torture you to death.”
Molopouis cursed and said that he will return and get revenge even if it means destroying all of Danebael.
Chapter 7: Molopoius's return?
All was peaceful in Danebael, though the inhabitants were still recovering from Molopoius's betrayal. They were uneasy and worried that he may come back and take over again. One day a cloaked figure stood by Odabchat plaza. He suddenly whipped out his staff and pointed it at the plaza. He then changed it into a fiery obsidian building.
"Behold, I am Maltad Metta! I have taken over Danebael and will destroy it in 2 months hence. They changing of Odabchat is proof I am now High Councilor. " He then vanished in a poof of smoke. The people were shaken and the council started to fret. Some thought that Maltad was Molopoius, and an apparition of Molopoius even appeared and confirmed this, but the council disagreed. They said Molopoius was far too weak to defeat Listorn. They knew they were facing a powerful for indeed. After worrying for days or even weeks before a solution was found. Pikulus the spell weaver brought before the rest of the council his latest creation, an amulet known as Mavio that could save them all.
Chapter 8: Mavio vs Maltad Metta
Pikulus ordered everyone to take a Mavio god their own safety and for the safety of all of Danebael. He warned everyone that they needed to take one or they may be destroyed. He kept the purpose of Mavio secret to all but the council but stated that if everyone had one Maltad could be stopped. The people loyally put on Mavios and everyone wrote curses to Maltad on their robes. After the council saw that operation Mavio was too far underway to be stopped they reveled its purpose; It was a tracking thingy to identify Maltad and stop him. The people then waited for destruction day. On destruction day it was not Maltad but Listorn who appeared. He was Maltad all along and this was all a test for the council to see if they could stop a real enemy. He said they did well then resumed his role as High Councilor.
Chapter 9: Recent history
Shadow returned after many years. He was stranded in land known as Cafolrana and after risking life and limb he managed to return to Danebael. The position of High councilor was shared by Listorn, Ji, and Vurz, with Listorn having hierarchy over Ji and Ji being higher than Vurz, though Vurz was the one with the real power as he was the one who was in Danebael the most. Vacon tried to build up the guild again, but it failed once again. Secretus disappeared. Gaeoedoae started recording the history of Danebael. Three guilds sprang up, Tru Bu, Noogas, and Noob. Gaeoedoae became a member of Tru Bu. But the guilds did not last, and eventually they disintegrated.
Chapter 10: The Final Battle
Listorn had secrets. The darkest secrets in the world. To this day the secrets are not known. His greatest secret was the prophecy of death.
One day Listorn announced that Danebael would be destroyed before the 25 of May. He also discussed with the councilors that a new being will enter Danebael and replace him as high councilor. Some of the high ranking councilors, including Solius, also came to the conclusion that Listorn was not actually a god. They decided to overthrow him. On the first of May Solius, backed by the people of Danebael, attempted to assassinate him, but he was defeated. Listorn then resigned as high councilor and appointed a foreigner, Lagos, as his successor. Lagos was cruel ruler who did not understand Danebael and soon war broke up. Many fled, and one brave citizan, Dizabad, took with him as much of the record or Danebael as he could. The refuges then set up a new city in a new land and called it New Danebael. Back in Danebael Listorn realized his mistake and then fought Lagos. The resulting fight destroyed Danebael, and Listorn and Lagos with it, but Listorn distracted Lagos long enough for most of Danebael to flee into the desert, and most of them eventually ended up in New Danebael, an even greater land.
Epilogue: The Sorting of the Ashes
The New Danebael was a great and prosperous nation, but it lacked many of the things the old Danebael had. Many citizens died or were otherwise lost in the final battle, and the much of the records were lost. Solius, Vurz, and Shadow Lornn took charge of new Danebael together, One day a man named Bareq came to New Danebael. After he settled there for a while it was discovered that he was actually Molopoius. He was about to flee the city, when the new triumvirate cleared the charges that Listorn place upon him. Farther investigation discovered that Molopoius never was Grenpato, and the only reason he confessed to it was because he was distraught after he was thrown out of the wizard's guild. The real Grenpato fled into the desert after the crime was commited and was slain by Molopoius during his exile. One day the people of New Danebael noticed a figure outside the city walls: it was Listorn. He explained how he survived his battle with Lagos and has since spent his restoring Old Danebael with the help of the original creator, Frogga, and Solios. The old city is now accessible, but still uninhabitable. Listorn then left, saying the he no longer fit to rule Danebael. The people were in power now.
Chapter one: A temple to Hassi
In the beginning there was a desert. Frogga, the high priest of Hassi, cast her staff into the ground and built a temple to Hassi around it. She then found two followers, Linkz and Listorn,who was a demigod, and made them priests. People began to come to the Temple and soon it grew into a city known as Danebael. The priests became councilors and many new buildings began to spring up. Shops, libraries, and even a massive trash heap known as the spama. A currency was created for Danebael known as Danebaelums. New councilors were appointed, who's names were mainly lost during the disaster that was to come. People began leaving Danebael in mass and soon there was few people left. In a desperate attempt Frogga offered 25 Danebaelums for every person someone brings to Danebael. But none cared that much but a nameless soul who posted an ad in the lawless city of Pigcommenta. Soon all that remained was Frogga, Listorn, and a councilor known as Swerin Woth. Frogga gave her staff to Listorn and appointed him high councilor, and then she disappeared in the desert winds. Danebael was dead.
Chapter 2: Rising shadow
In the city of Pigcommenta a man known as Shadow Lornn saw the ad for Danebael. He thought it looked interesting. So he trekked across the desert sands until he reached Danebael. He did not realize the city was dead and he set out to buy some stuff to improve his appearance. So he entered a shop and found some really neat looking flaming stars that could be pinned to your cloak, robe, or armor. He wanted to buy them but they cost 500 danebaelums and he had no danebaelums, so he left the shop. Then he saw Frogga's ad for recruiting people. He then decided to go out and get 20 members to come so he could buy those stars. He went back to Pigcommenta and posted ads and even made a monument called an uploadios to tell people to come to Danebael. Soon 20 people came and he sent a message to Frogga requesting 500 danebaelums. After many days he still got no reply so he sent a message to Listorn. Soon Listorn came to him in person, gave him 500 danebaelums, and told him the sad fate of Danebael. Shadow bought the stars and then went back to Listorn, saying Danebael still had hope, for he managed to bring 20 souls and could bring more. Then he set off the save Danebael.
Chapter 3: Golden Age
Soon Danebael was repopulated. A new council was formed with Listorn at it's head. Second to Listorn was Swerin Woth and a being named Ji. Shadow was also of very high rank. Some other interesting councilors were Querty Solius, who secretly led a group of assassins called Noongas under the name Temp Nin, Zandzar, who led a bizarre cult that worshiped Listorn as the creator of life, and Shigat, who changed his name every few days. A new temple was built were people prayed for miracles. That place was informally run by a person named Secretus. One day Shadow disappeared. Things went on without him. A few years after Shadows disappearance Secretus and a highly respected citizen named Vurz were made councilors. All was good until the day a resident of Danebael had this plan.
Chapter 4: The wizards guild
Vaconcovat was a skilled spell weaver. He was so skilled that he created an entire world. One day he had the idea to build a massive arena in the heart of Danebael. He consulted with Listorn and soon they decided to create a building outside of Danebael were the task of making the arena was to be prepared. The building was divided into three guilds: the ideas guild, the artisan guild, and the wizards guild. Vacon ruled all three guilds. People soon flocked to the ideas guild, but to join the artisans guild one needed proof of art, and to join the wizards guild one needed to show proof of spell craft. A councilor, Molopouis, joined the wizards guild. However, it was soon discovered that Molopouis plagiarized the spell and in a blind rage Vacon cast out Molopouis and he was banished from Danebael. Later the building that held the guilds was destroyed in a monster sand storm.
Chapter 5: Chaos and destruction
Listorn announced one day that on Avril 1st, jokers day, Danebael would be destroyed. On Avril 1st everyone in Danebael woke up and found themselves in an alternate dimension. It was an odd place similar to Danebael, only it lacked all the buildings and Danebaelums turned to dust. Soon people were rioting. Gaeoedoae, a resident of Danebael, left this odd place and searched for Danebael. After traveling for days he found Danebael, but the moment he entered he was warped back to the odd place. When he and others also discovered the truth and that it was all just a huge prank they demanded that Listorn destroy the spell. But Listorn was gone. Gaeoedoae and a group of councilors found a way to prevent the spell from warping them back and returned to Danebael so they could destroy the spell. When they got there they found the place in ruins. Osine destroyed the spell and appointed Gaeoedoae, a resident named Grenpato, and some other residents as temporary councilors so they could help fix the place up. While Gaeoedoae was councilor he made this day a holiday,and did some other stuff to help. It was soon discovered that Secretus went insane under the pressure of the spell and warning, and was what caused the destruction of Danebael. He was demoted temporarily. Shortly after all the temporary councilors were demoted a tragedy happened. All the councilors, save Listorn and a lesser councilor named Emfor, were found dead.
Chapter 6: The judgment
After Listorn returned he revived the councilors with his divine powers. He then started an investigation of the crime.It was found that the Solius massacred the councilors and then killed himself. hat made no sense, since Solius was most loyal to Listorn and would never do such an evil act.Under further investigation it was discovered that Solius was possessed by Grenpato. But Grenpato was nowhere to be seen and he had nowhere to go, so it was concluded that Grenpato was another person in disguise. It was obvious that only one being would have the motive to disguise themselves: Molopouis, who immediately confessed and even gloated about his evil. Molopouis was brought before Listorn in chains.
“Molopouis, you have been charged with the murder of Vurz, Solius, Secretus, Arode, Osine, Bogi, Zandzar, and many more. For your punishment you are forever banished from Danebael and have a death warrant placed upon your head. Your name shall forever be a forbidden curse. Leave now or we will slowly torture you to death.”
Molopouis cursed and said that he will return and get revenge even if it means destroying all of Danebael.
Chapter 7: Molopoius's return?
All was peaceful in Danebael, though the inhabitants were still recovering from Molopoius's betrayal. They were uneasy and worried that he may come back and take over again. One day a cloaked figure stood by Odabchat plaza. He suddenly whipped out his staff and pointed it at the plaza. He then changed it into a fiery obsidian building.
"Behold, I am Maltad Metta! I have taken over Danebael and will destroy it in 2 months hence. They changing of Odabchat is proof I am now High Councilor. " He then vanished in a poof of smoke. The people were shaken and the council started to fret. Some thought that Maltad was Molopoius, and an apparition of Molopoius even appeared and confirmed this, but the council disagreed. They said Molopoius was far too weak to defeat Listorn. They knew they were facing a powerful for indeed. After worrying for days or even weeks before a solution was found. Pikulus the spell weaver brought before the rest of the council his latest creation, an amulet known as Mavio that could save them all.
Chapter 8: Mavio vs Maltad Metta
Pikulus ordered everyone to take a Mavio god their own safety and for the safety of all of Danebael. He warned everyone that they needed to take one or they may be destroyed. He kept the purpose of Mavio secret to all but the council but stated that if everyone had one Maltad could be stopped. The people loyally put on Mavios and everyone wrote curses to Maltad on their robes. After the council saw that operation Mavio was too far underway to be stopped they reveled its purpose; It was a tracking thingy to identify Maltad and stop him. The people then waited for destruction day. On destruction day it was not Maltad but Listorn who appeared. He was Maltad all along and this was all a test for the council to see if they could stop a real enemy. He said they did well then resumed his role as High Councilor.
Chapter 9: Recent history
Shadow returned after many years. He was stranded in land known as Cafolrana and after risking life and limb he managed to return to Danebael. The position of High councilor was shared by Listorn, Ji, and Vurz, with Listorn having hierarchy over Ji and Ji being higher than Vurz, though Vurz was the one with the real power as he was the one who was in Danebael the most. Vacon tried to build up the guild again, but it failed once again. Secretus disappeared. Gaeoedoae started recording the history of Danebael. Three guilds sprang up, Tru Bu, Noogas, and Noob. Gaeoedoae became a member of Tru Bu. But the guilds did not last, and eventually they disintegrated.
Chapter 10: The Final Battle
Listorn had secrets. The darkest secrets in the world. To this day the secrets are not known. His greatest secret was the prophecy of death.
One day Listorn announced that Danebael would be destroyed before the 25 of May. He also discussed with the councilors that a new being will enter Danebael and replace him as high councilor. Some of the high ranking councilors, including Solius, also came to the conclusion that Listorn was not actually a god. They decided to overthrow him. On the first of May Solius, backed by the people of Danebael, attempted to assassinate him, but he was defeated. Listorn then resigned as high councilor and appointed a foreigner, Lagos, as his successor. Lagos was cruel ruler who did not understand Danebael and soon war broke up. Many fled, and one brave citizan, Dizabad, took with him as much of the record or Danebael as he could. The refuges then set up a new city in a new land and called it New Danebael. Back in Danebael Listorn realized his mistake and then fought Lagos. The resulting fight destroyed Danebael, and Listorn and Lagos with it, but Listorn distracted Lagos long enough for most of Danebael to flee into the desert, and most of them eventually ended up in New Danebael, an even greater land.
Epilogue: The Sorting of the Ashes
The New Danebael was a great and prosperous nation, but it lacked many of the things the old Danebael had. Many citizens died or were otherwise lost in the final battle, and the much of the records were lost. Solius, Vurz, and Shadow Lornn took charge of new Danebael together, One day a man named Bareq came to New Danebael. After he settled there for a while it was discovered that he was actually Molopoius. He was about to flee the city, when the new triumvirate cleared the charges that Listorn place upon him. Farther investigation discovered that Molopoius never was Grenpato, and the only reason he confessed to it was because he was distraught after he was thrown out of the wizard's guild. The real Grenpato fled into the desert after the crime was commited and was slain by Molopoius during his exile. One day the people of New Danebael noticed a figure outside the city walls: it was Listorn. He explained how he survived his battle with Lagos and has since spent his restoring Old Danebael with the help of the original creator, Frogga, and Solios. The old city is now accessible, but still uninhabitable. Listorn then left, saying the he no longer fit to rule Danebael. The people were in power now.
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