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Haiku!
Nov 19, 2012 3:02:38 GMT
Post by Clockwork on Nov 19, 2012 3:02:38 GMT
A poem is a form of writing which uses the aesthetics in language to invoke meaning.
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Haiku!
Nov 19, 2012 8:36:50 GMT
Post by Qwerty on Nov 19, 2012 8:36:50 GMT
That last post was not Quite considered a Haiku. Try again later.
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Haiku!
Nov 19, 2012 15:44:58 GMT
Post by Clockwork on Nov 19, 2012 15:44:58 GMT
Why is your first and second lines bleeding into eachother. They should be able to stand on their own, or they should be an observation.
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Haiku!
Nov 19, 2012 21:51:04 GMT
Post by Alonso on Nov 19, 2012 21:51:04 GMT
the-o-ra-tic-lly, hai-kus,De-scribe a mo-ment in time, And na-ture
By nature generally a scene connecting to a season. And this - are to show syllables, like you would in a singing score.
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Haiku!
Nov 19, 2012 22:56:25 GMT
Post by Qwerty on Nov 19, 2012 22:56:25 GMT
You have to haiku. Elton, post in Haiku please. Your posts aren't haiku.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 0:10:40 GMT
Post by Alonso on Nov 20, 2012 0:10:40 GMT
I agree qwerty, Remember the rules of it, Of five, seven five.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 0:15:17 GMT
Post by Clockwork on Nov 20, 2012 0:15:17 GMT
Counting syllables, Tedious but rewarding, A+ poem, mate
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 0:19:40 GMT
Post by Alonso on Nov 20, 2012 0:19:40 GMT
A pity it is, That this does not count towards The art badge on here.
I pronounce badge with 1 syllable whereas some pronounce it as bad-ge with a hard g after te d.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 1:22:45 GMT
Post by Qwerty on Nov 20, 2012 1:22:45 GMT
That one might now count. Only six syllables there, In the middle line.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 1:23:19 GMT
Post by Clockwork on Nov 20, 2012 1:23:19 GMT
Who the hell pronounces it bad-ge with a hard g? That's not correct.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 21:15:45 GMT
Post by Alonso on Nov 20, 2012 21:15:45 GMT
I am not sorry, As it is seven, alright, Check your eyesight now. In the middle line, that this does not count is 5 syllables then you have towards, which is to-wards. 7 syllables.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 21:26:59 GMT
Post by Qwerty on Nov 20, 2012 21:26:59 GMT
Oh, that is the key. I was mispronouncing it. Used one syllable.
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Haiku!
Nov 20, 2012 22:51:56 GMT
Post by Alonso on Nov 20, 2012 22:51:56 GMT
Mister sunshine, how, Do you pronounce towards as, And about the badge?
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Haiku!
Nov 27, 2012 5:10:30 GMT
Post by Qwerty on Nov 27, 2012 5:10:30 GMT
I only use one. That's just how I pronounce it. Can't be explained much.
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